This week we have been learning to add detail by starting from 3 or 4 words and changing it to create a better picture. The sentence I choose was THE DOG BARKED
and below this is how I made it more detail.
The brown angry pit-bull barked at me as I slowly and quietly stumbled out of my flash black truck. My heart was beating like an old steam train. My head was pounding and all I had left to do was run.
Hey dude!
ReplyDeleteThat is cool describing, I like the way you said what you were feeling. You better keep up the good work man.
From BOB