What makes a good narrative?

We have been learning about writing a narrative. A good narrative includes who, what, when, where and why. It also includes detail, a problem and a solution. It also needs an interesting start and end and language features like similes.

One of these things that I do well is having an interesting start and the W's.

One of these things that I need to get better at is putting in some language features and 1 problem and solution.

speeches

This term room 15 are doing speeches. This is what I think about speeches .
I think that speeches are hard and when I do a speech I get nervous. I feel that way because i am a very shy person and im not use to doing speeches.

I think i need to get better at eye contact and speaking more clearly. I also think I need to get better at being confident while i am talking.

Segregation

In room15 this week have been learnig about our word of the week segregation.Segregation is when two groups of people are separated.

what helped me learn what sgregation ment was mr marquand showing
us photo's about coloured people and white people how white people were only allowed in sertain plces and so were coloured people also when we did our work which was on blue and green eyed to brown eyed people.