We have been learning about writing a narrative. A good narrative includes who, what, when, where and why. It also includes detail, a problem and a solution. It also needs an interesting start and end and language features like similes.
One of these things that I do well is having an interesting start and the W's.
One of these things that I need to get better at is putting in some language features and 1 problem and solution.
Great thinking Kaawhia. One thing you do really well but forgot to mention is that a good narrative is well planned. This is one of the things you did really well on your last story.
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